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 Skull Heads (2009)
IMDB rating: 1.80
Plot: Skull Heads opens with 18-year-old Naomi being tied to a medieval rack by her father for committing the grievous sin of bringing a cellular phone into her family’s home. And you thought your parents were strict.
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Directors: Band Charles
Actors: Jameson Rane,Horror
Would anyone care to read the first chapter of my story?
Okay, so, this was inspired by My Little Pony. I think that it’s beautiful, but I want to know what you think:
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Many long years ago, in a place called Middle Earth, there lived a skeleton and he wasn’t very happy. He was actually kind of pissed because he had lost his sword, and without his sword, he couldn’t activate his magical skeleton powers. So, he hijacked a spaceship from Liberty City to Jupiter to get it back from that one guy who’s in that movie about the stuff that happens.
Anyway, the skeleton arrived at Jupiter and immediately jumped out of his spaceship and started swimming through the atmosphere of space, because in Middle Earth there’s an atmosphere in space. Also, Jupiter is in Middle Earth and Middle Earth is actually Silent Hill. So pyramid head was there and so was the Hall 9000.
The skeleton was all, like, floating around. Then he saw that guy and he said stuff like, "Give me back my sword" and stuff. I think that he also had a bomb or something maybe, but that’s irrelevant because the guy was actually a robot and the skeleton totally knew how to kill robots with nothing but common tap water. He poured it in the robot’s eyes and its skull exploded.
Then, the robot took his sword back and went back to his ship, but it only had enough fuel to get back to the Earth with his weight and the sword and his rare mint collection of every Eminem CD ever recorded. Anyway, there was a chick on the ship somehow, and there was a lot sad stuff, then he straight up jettisoned her through the airlock.
-The End-
Do you think it’s good?
Chapter two has a shark with feathers, but I’m not going to ruin anymore of it here. You’ll have to buy this once it hits the top of the New York Times bestseller list before you can find out about Feather Jaws.
HA! Not bad, not bad! I would think that you wouldn’t use proper grammar, but ‘whoo-hoo?’ You did! … Well, kind of. Honestly though, your first sentence is a bore.There is a tone here, though it sounds relatively childish. I’d judge your around young to mid teens based off your writing. Ehh, whatever. Good luck making it to the New York Times bestseller list.
sugar_coated_deception | Dec 18, 2009
Wow. Are you serious? Because this really seems like one of those posts people do for attention or because they think they are funny. I could bring myself to waste my time actually reading the whole thing, I skimmed…which means it was bad…like, really bad…not even funny bad…
Gothic Grammer | Dec 18, 2009
Your writing could use "a little" help……
Lee T | Dec 18, 2009
What are you on? OK, You asked, So I’ll give my opinion. I bet you are some one just looking for attention. This might be cute if you were five.
Aleda B. | Dec 18, 2009
I’m not going to say it was bad, because I enjoy writing myself and I wouldn’t won’t ANYONE hating on my novel. So, what I’m going to do is give you advice. Take the word like out of the sentences you’ve used them in. Quit using nouns you’ve heard in movies add a bit of action and characterization into it and you’ve got a novel. You’re a good writer. You just need a bit of enthusiasm.
Ashley | Dec 18, 2009